How Joomla! can be used in Higher Education ? --> How can Joomla! be used in Higher Education?
Little bit of natural flow issue. Consider changing this:
Joomla! provides you with a lot of easy and useful components. Web pages based on Joomla! system can become a perfect place for exchanging information between teachers and students
Joomla! has thousands of easy to use and useful extensions. Web pages can be built with Joomla! to better enable teachers and students to exchange information.http://www.joomla.org
I absolutely LOVE the Joomla! logo with the hat. I probably better double-check that it qualifies for the logo usage guidelines. :P
Consider changing "open" to "create" (and remove the comma)
Everyone, who wants to open create
a website can use Joomla!.
Love the bulleted list What does Joomla! give you?
excellent looks --> stylish site? beautiful website? not sure.
a lot of different tools and components --> thousands of extensions on the Joomla! extension directory.
remove --> You don't have to know any web technologies. (they should know some things - trust me - I've spent enough time in the forums ;) )
Few minutes and you can enjoy your new, fully equipped and interactive website :) --> not a complete sentence. The words "and interactive" are in a different font size.
A lot of different websites are based on our system. --> on this award winning CMS. (instead of on our system.)
schools' or universities' sites --> school and university sites
Look on the logo guidelines page - at the branding manual - in there, you will find the hex value for Joomla! blue. Use that instead of the blue in use. That will bring more of the Joomla! look to your very excellent tri-fold.