How Joomla! can be used in Higher Education ? --> How can Joomla! be used in Higher Education?
Little bit of natural flow issue. Consider changing this:
Quote:
Joomla! provides you with a lot of easy and useful components. Web pages based on Joomla! system can become a perfect place for exchanging information between teachers and students
To:
Joomla! has thousands of easy to use and useful extensions. Web pages can be built with Joomla! to better enable teachers and students to exchange information.
http://www.joomla.org --> joomla.org
I absolutely LOVE the Joomla! logo with the hat. I probably better double-check that it qualifies for the logo usage guidelines. :P
Consider changing "open" to "create" (and remove the comma)
Everyone, who wants to open
create a website can use Joomla!.
Love the bulleted list What does Joomla! give you?
excellent looks --> stylish site? beautiful website? not sure.
a lot of different tools and components --> thousands of extensions on the Joomla! extension directory.
remove --> You don't have to know any web technologies. (they should know some things - trust me - I've spent enough time in the forums ;) )
Few minutes and you can enjoy your new, fully equipped and interactive website :) --> not a complete sentence. The words "and interactive" are in a different font size.
A lot of different websites are based on our system. --> on this award winning CMS. (instead of on our system.)
schools' or universities' sites --> school and university sites
Look on the logo guidelines page - at the branding manual - in there, you will find the hex value for Joomla! blue. Use that instead of the blue in use. That will bring more of the Joomla! look to your very excellent tri-fold.
Thanks!
Amy
