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The name Joomla! is the English spelling of
the Swahili word jumla
which is meaning “all
together”. Joomla! is a
-Does John Doe need to know this?
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Your Advantages
-Change this to just "Advantages"
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...for not for profit organizations
-change all instances of "not for profit" to the more common "nonprofit"
-I love that picture on the title page!!!
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Joomla! is mainly developed by the core
team, who are responsible for Project
Managing tasks. The core team contains
currently sixteen members, moving the
development on Joomla! forward.
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Joomla! is mainly developed by the core
team. The core team is responsible for the project
management tasks. The core team currently contains
sixteen members, and help move the development of
Joomla! forward.
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Joomla! is ideally for
-Joomla! is ideal for
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With using Joomla! you are
-should be "When you use Joomla!, you are"
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The other benefit of using Joomla! is, that we
give you a software which is powerful and
flexible on the one hand, and very easy to
use on the other hand.
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The other benefit of using Joomla! is the fact that we
give you a software which is powerful and
flexible, as well as very easy to
use.
-PHP, (X)HTML, and CSS are scripting languages. If you were to say "HTML programming" to a true hacker, you would be laughed at.
-One thing you may want to do with the "Who uses Joomla!?" section is focus in on one (or maybe two) nonprofit organizations. Send an email to the webmaster and do a quick interview. Just mention that you are on the Joomla! team. He/she should give you enough info to write a little blurb about why he/she chose Joomla!, and how it has helped him/her.
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Should I post this also to the issue on the GHOP Contest Page of Joomla?
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