I'm loving it!
Not sure where you got this number: because over 40,000 people use it, ? There are already over 150,000 forum ids - also people who use Joomla! who don't have ids. Truthfully, we have no idea how many use it. I would change to many all over the globe, or some such thing.
Love this paragraph written for librarians in simple terms - good stuff - the entire next page is good, too.
Joomla! can handle both static and
active content. Static content is
things that do not change, like
directions to the library, contact
information, or instructions for getting
a library card. Active content is pages
that do change, like recent news, or
I appreciate this comment, but would remove "from Drupal". Otherwise, love it. We are not competing against other OS projects and would like to stay away from that perception in print. (That takes nothing away from Randy's opinion, which I value.)
“Joomla!'s usability, learning curve,
and component/theme community of
developers far surpasses anything
that I have seen from Drupal. [. . .]
We are strongly encouraging at least two pictures of library sites to prevent it from looking like ads for one library. So, if you could get a picture of another site, that would be appreciated.
We are also not allowing URLs outside of J!, so removing all by joomla.org on the back page is important.
One other thing, and this is just me. I prefer black text, unless it is a bit of colored text here and there. The red headings are great. But, I would change the body text to black. Your call - just my opinion.
Really nice piece. Next submission, I am confident this will close.