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Joomla! User Manual 1.0x
5/15/2006 11:16.52PM
Version 0.01
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Below Images screen shot:
1st paragraph:
1st sentence: ...embedded in to (<--typo, should be 'into') our documents (<--insert comma) but where...
2nd sentence: Joomla (<--typo, add ! after Joomla)...through the Admin panel. (note: Previously, this was called
Administrator or Adminstrator's panel. Recommend one of the 3 names throughout for consistancy.)
3rd sentence: ...to your Joomla (<--typo, add ! after Joomla) web site.
4th sentence: ...folder called stories (recommend "stories" as per previous writing style)
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1st paragraph:
3rd sentence: ...illustration above (<--insert comma) you will see there are two folders, (<--remove comma)
Note: For consistancy, should be a line break space between 1st and 2nd paragraphs.
Below Access level screen shot:...determines who can see the article; (<-- should be a colon, not a semi-colon)
Access table:
Public: ...including guests that (<--should be 'who', not that)
Registered: note: Awkward read due to capitalization of all three: Access Level Registered. Recommend changing to
either "Access Level registered" or access level Registered). Also, after Registered (<--insert comma) the content..
Special: currently ??. Missing info.
Below Access Table:
1st paragraph: Insert line break for spacing consistancy after table, before paragraph.
1st sentence: ...Author Alias (<--insert comma)
3rd paragraph:
1st sentence: ...a time (<--insert the word 'is')'Year-Month-Day Hour:Minutes:Seconds'. (<--space seems insufficient for
distinction between two elements. Recommend: 'Year-Month-Day / Hour:Minutes:Seconds'
2nd sentence: ...the picture above (<--insert comma) this article...
3rd sentence: ...as the Start Publishing field (<--insert comma) but also...the keyword 'Never' (<--insert comma)
allowing the article..
Blue Note box:
2nd sentence: ...Publishing date and time (<--insert comma) the article will no (<--typo, should be 'not' instead of
'no') show up..by the author (<--insert comma) so they should...published (<--insert word 'by') users with ...
Last paragraph, 2nd sentence: Joomla (<--typo, add ! after Joomla) includes...
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Below calendar screen shot, blue Note box:
1st sentence: ...will have to reenter (<--typo, is re-enter) the time..
2nd sentence: As per P. 29, again recommend: 'Year-Month-Day Hour:Minutes:Seconds'. (<--space seems insufficient
for distinction between two elements. Recommend: 'Year-Month-Day / Hour:Minutes:Seconds'
(note: Additionally, words used on P. 29 - 3rd paragraph below Access Table were ..accept the same date/time,
therefore using slash rather than a space seems all the more appropriate.)
Below Metadata screen shot:
2nd sentence: The following html (<--for consistancy throughout, should be HTML capitalized as others) code...
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Editor
1st paragraph:
1st sentence: In Joomla,(<--typo, add ! after Joomla) authors may...
2nd sentence: Additionally (<--insert comma) editors..
3rd sentence: ...to submit new content, (<--change comma to semi-colon)
2nd paragraph:
1st sentence: ...into the Joomla(<--typo, add ! after Joomla) system (<--insert comma) authors will see...
3rd sentence: From here (<--insert comma) the author...
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1st paragraph:
1st sentence: ...web site is the additions (<--typo, should be 'addition') of a new...
Below Publishing screen shot:
1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: When published (<--insert comma) the article...Start Publishing and Finishing (<--typo,
should be Finish) Publishing fields.
Blue Note box:
1st sentence: publishers (<--typo, should be Publishers) may publish articles on Joomla(<--typo, add ! after
Joomla) web sites that (<--typo, should be 'who') have no access...
2nd sentence: ...assigned to a user, (<--no comma necessary)...in the public friend (<--typo, should be front-end)
of the web site.
3rd sentence: ...be discussed a (<--typo, remove 'a') later on in this users (<--typo, should be user's or users'
possessive) guide.
Submitting Weblinks:
1st paragraph:
1st sentence: ...submitted in a Joomla(<--typo, add ! after Joomla) is the..
2nd sentence: ...by all registered user is (<--typo, should be registered users, not 'user is') of a Joomla(<--typo,
add ! after Joomla) web site.
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Below Submit a Web Link screen shot:
1st sentence: ...that immediately after submitting a new Web link that (<--insert comma after 'link' and remove the
word 'that')
Below Example News Item 4 screen shot:
1st sentence: ...in a Joomla(<--typo, add ! after Joomla) web site.
2nd sentence: ...front end (<--for consistancy, front-end) of the Joomla(<--typo, add ! after Joomla) web site!
Below blue Note box:
2nd sentence: ...Joomla! installation (<--insert comma) this is ...
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Check-In My Items:
1st paragraph:
2nd sentence: ...is that Joomla(<--typo, add ! after Joomla) locks..
2nd paragraph:
2nd sentence: ...cause this to occur; (<--typo, should be colon, not semi-colon)
3rd paragraph:
1st sentence: ...properly can lock users (<--more accurately, can lock the content item and prevent users) from..
2nd sentence: ...an edit icon, (<--no comma necessary) to edit..box display; (<--typo, should be comma, not
semi-colon) below lock screen shot: It (<--continued from above screen shot, should be lower case
'it') probably means...
3rd sentence: To correct this, users my (<--typo, should be 'may') use the...
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Chapter 5 - Accessing functions from the Backend - Manager
Table of contents items:
Organising (<--comes up consistantly...Queen's English ok, but in US is Organizing)
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Managing Modules:
Introduction:
Bulleted list: (note: again, consistancy as most bulleted lists in doc do not use periods at the end of items. This
bulleted list does.)
Last item on list: ...to show how to customise (<--Queen's or US English-->customize) them.
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Note: Too much space between text and table/icon screen shots
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Access Level - Select the Access Level, which is able to view the module. (note: For smoother read, suggest: Select
the Access Level needed to view the module.)
Banners
Definition: end of sentence...(See also Managing Components - Banners. (<--typo, need closing parenthesis...))
Parameters:
Banner client - ....be separated by a comma,. (<--typo, either ',' should be deleted or encased (,))
Module Class Suffix - ...table.moduletable (note/question: Should insert '.' for .css?)...individual customisation
(<--Queen's or US English -->customization)
Main Menu
Parameters:
Menu Class Suffix - ...table.moduletable (note/question: Should insert '.' for .css?) class, which...individual
customisation (<--Queen's or US English -->customization)
Module Class Suffix - ...table.moduletable (note/question: Should insert '.' for .css?) class, which...individual
customisation (<--Queen's or US English -->customization)
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Newsflash
Parameters:
Module Class Suffix - ...table.moduletable (note/question: Should insert '.' for .css?) class, which...individual
customisation (<--Queen's or US English -->customization)
Menu Item Link(s) - Select the Page(s) or Items that the module should be displayed. (<--For smoother read, recommend
Select the Page(s) or Items that the module should display.)
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Latest News
Definition:
Last sentence: ...a selection of Sections and or (<--suggest and/or) Categories.
Parameters:
Module Class Suffix - ...table.moduletable (note/question: Should insert '.' for .css?) class that...individual
customisation (<--Queen's or US English -->customization)
Category ID -(<--add space before sentence begins) Select items... multiple Categories with a comma,. (<--typo, either
',' should be deleted or encased (,))
Section ID - ...multiple Sections with a comma,. (<--typo, either ',' should be deleted or encased (,))
Menu Item Link(s) - ...that the module should be displayed. (<--For smoother read, recommend Select the Page(s) or Items
that the module should display.)
Tips & Tricks - Latest News
After ? icon: By copying the module (see Introduction), definite different Section and Category criteria
and applying different moduletable th and td styles you can create a distinctive style of
specific Latest News modules. (note: For smoother read, recommend: By copying the module (see
Introduction), you can define different Section and Category criteria and apply different moduletable
th and td styles to create a distinctive style of specific Latest News modules.)
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