[2nd Revision] : To Do: Module: Newsfeed 1.1x

[charlwillia6]

Please edit and proof-read this text. I will then update the admin manual.  Please read: Guidelines for Editing and Proof-reading:

http://forum.joomla.org/index.php/topic,437.0.html

Please publish your work here in this thread.

Thanks!
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Module: Newsfeed
http://help.joomla.org/content/view/1560/196/

[rdb]

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[rdb]

  *** Checked back in  ***

[rdb]

This module has been placed in the document area and the changelog updated.

It is ready for review by a fresh set of eyes.

[Michelle Bisson]

We are seeking those in the community who can help us review any help screen with [2nd Revision] in the subject line.  This can be done by anyone without committing to the documentation project. 

Of course, if you are interested in actively helping out the doc team, please let us know.

Thanks!

[nathandiehl]

Details:
Published:
inconsistant use of Pages/Items, Pages / Items
Pages/Items:
The positionsshould be singular position that the module is actually displayed is affected by the choices made in the "Position" menu mentioned on this page.

Parameters
Items: Enter the number of individual feed items to display from the RSS feed. If this number is higher than the number fixed by the Syndicating site, the site’s value will be used.This ref. to 'site' isn't clear--which site's value?
Item Description: Click the “Yes” radio button to display the descriptions of individual feed items. Click the “No” radio button to hide description information.descriptions should be singular, as you're refering to 'individual', which is singular.
Word Count: Enter the maximum number of words to display for each feed item. This text is usually a summary of the content the feed item points to.
This is an extra line of space and should be deleted, imho
Note: If this value is “0” then the item’s entire text will be displayed.